ch 46: -On page 4: occassion > occasion -On page 6 this sentence is unclear, where "been" is repeated twice: It would've been last been at the new year's party... -On page 9: ...with those there blades? > ...with those three blades? -On page 10: ...be playing hero. > ...be playing hero? -On page 18: seargent > sergeant -On page 21 is this sentence correct: ...by amputating them. -On page 22: idendity > identity -On page 23 is this sentence correct: Rima Mari is at a toy manufacturer.
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ReplyDeletech 46:
-On page 4:
occassion > occasion
-On page 6 this sentence is unclear, where "been" is repeated twice:
It would've been last been at the new year's party...
-On page 9:
...with those there blades? > ...with those three blades?
-On page 10:
...be playing hero. > ...be playing hero?
-On page 18:
seargent > sergeant
-On page 21 is this sentence correct:
...by amputating them.
-On page 22:
idendity > identity
-On page 23 is this sentence correct:
Rima Mari is at a toy manufacturer.
ch 47:
-On page 12:
assualt > assault
-On page 18:
ccming > coming
-On page 23:
crminials > criminals
Again, thank you for your work!
Very belated but thanks.
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