So here's the second of the stupidly long Survival chapters, in which we meet another two new faces.
This chapter's also quite funny in that it really feels like a Golgo chapter at times (especially the huge chunks of text about completely irrelevant matters).
On a related note I was talking to my editor and he said he felt the description of the foehn effect was quite confusing so I went back and reworded some of chapter 37. If you read this chapter it's explained again anyway though so it's not too big a deal.
Next up will probably be Yuzumori unless I just blitz the next 90 page Survival chapter instead.
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